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 Give the                                                                                          Have you
 review a game                                                                                     included
 rating and title.  A great app for gardeners!   Twins are people who were born on               some relative
                                                                                                  pronouns?
            How does your            the same day as their brothers or
 I use an app called What plant?   story begin?

 because I’m keen on gardening.      sisters. Tarek and Amir were twins.

 I don’t always know the name of     They were born in the desert 40
 plants, so this app really helps.  Who are the   years ago, far from other people.
            characters in the
 Include a short   story?
 introduction.  Good points:  Use    They had goats, chickens and

 adjectives    Where and             camels. They didn’t have modern
 correctly.
 1.  It is really easy to use. Point your   when does the   things. And their house did not have
 phone camera at the plant and it   story ta�e place?                                               Have you

 tells you the name.                 mirrors.                                                        used the
 Include two
 or three good                       After thirty years, they visited a                            past tenses
 points.  2. It is cheap to buy.                                                                    correctly?
                                     town for the first time. They saw a

 3.  It quickly tells you the name of   Use adverbs   What happens   mirror in a shop.
 correctly.
 hundreds of plants.  in the middle?
                                     ‘Who’s that?’ said Tarek.

 Bad points:                                                                                       Have you
                                     ‘That’s you,’ said Amir.                                    written what
                                                                                                 the characters
 1.  It does not always work well when   ‘Oh! And that’s you!’ said Tarek                       said correctly?
 there is not much light.

                                      ‘We are the same!’ said Amir.
 Include two
 or three bad   2.  It does not always work when   How does your
 points.  plants do not have flowers or   story end?  ‘We learned something new today!’

 large leaves.                       laughed Tarek.                                                Have you
                                                                                                  included all
                                                                                                  the parts o�
                                                                                                   the story?


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