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                Give the                                                                                                                                                                                                  Have you
             review a game                                                                                                                                                                                                 included
            rating and title.                       A great app for gardeners!                                                                              Twins are people who were born on                           some relative
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         pronouns?
                                                                                                                                   How does your            the same day as their brothers or
                                          I use an app called What plant?                                                           story begin?

                                          because I’m keen on gardening.                                                                                    sisters. Tarek and Amir were twins.

                                          I don’t always know the name of                                                                                   They were born in the desert 40
                                          plants, so this app really helps.                                                          Who are the            years ago, far from other people.
                                                                                                                                   characters in the
            Include a short                                                                                                              story?
              introduction.               Good points:                                                  Use                                                 They had goats, chickens and

                                                                                                    adjectives                        Where and             camels. They didn’t have modern
                                                                                                    correctly.
                                          1.  It is really easy to use. Point your                                                  when does the           things. And their house did not have
                                             phone camera at the plant and it                                                      story ta�e place?                                                                       Have you

                                             tells you the name.                                                                                            mirrors.                                                        used the
              Include two
             or three good                                                                                                                                  After thirty years, they visited a                            past tenses
                 points.                  2. It is cheap to buy.                                                                                                                                                           correctly?
                                                                                                                                                            town for the first time. They saw a

                                          3.  It quickly tells you the name of                     Use adverbs                      What happens            mirror in a shop.
                                                                                                    correctly.
                                              hundreds of plants.                                                                   in the middle?
                                                                                                                                                            ‘Who’s that?’ said Tarek.

                                          Bad points:                                                                                                                                                                      Have you
                                                                                                                                                            ‘That’s you,’ said Amir.                                    written what
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        the characters
                                          1.  It does not always work well when                                                                             ‘Oh! And that’s you!’ said Tarek                            said correctly?
                                             there is not much light.

                                                                                                                                                             ‘We are the same!’ said Amir.
             Include two
            or three bad                  2.  It does not always work when                                                          How does your
                points.                       plants do not have flowers or                                                           story end?            ‘We learned something new today!’

                                              large leaves.                                                                                                 laughed Tarek.                                                Have you
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         included all
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         the parts o�
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          the story?


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