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Lesson 9, part 2 Literacy: r e vie ws 2 2
Lesson 9, part 2
Literacy: reviews

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Writing
1 Read CameraKid’s notes. Then complete the review. tip Writing
When you plan, make notes. You
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ don’t need to write sentences!
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ – Easy and fun!
★ ★ by CameraKid
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ – Easy and fun!
★ ★ ★
1
I use PhotoForum because I’m keen on photography.
really like PhotoForum,
2
A lot of my friends use this , too.
keen on photography; lots of my
Good points:
1 There are lots of 3 to join. Then you write
friends use same app
comments about people’s photos.
Good: can join lots of groups, write
2 It’s quite a good app because it’s 4 and it isn’t
comments; quite a good app, very
hard to use.
simple, easy to use; basic tools for
3 The app has 5 tools to edit photos quickly and
editing your photos; app is cheap –
easily. Some are fun too! 6
only 1 Rial
4 PhotoForum is cheap, too. It only costs , which
Bad: only see 4 photos on the
isn’t expensive.
screen at one time, can’t send any Bad points:
photos in private messages 1 You can only see 7 photos at once. Other apps do
this better, with more photos on the screen.
2 You can’t send photos in private 8 to friends.
That’s a problem for me!
2 Make some notes to plan a review about an app or game you use.

Give the app or game a
rating, e.g. 3 stars. Give
your review a title.

Write an introduction.
Explain why you use the
app or game.

List three or four good
points about it.

List two or three bad
points about it.

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